RoboJanitor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mice aren't for drawing]

I draw with a mouse

and it works just fine..... and i use a PC, so i dont see what you problem is.Ppractise (not excuses) make perfect. 2/10 1/5 you need to improve your art.

mickaleaf responds:

Thanks for your review. I'm not saying that drawing with a mouse is the reason for my lack of artistic talent. As an animator, I find it more efficient, especially for frame by frame, to use a tablet. If you've done animation before you would probably understand. Also, I never criticized PCs, it's just that I have a Mac displayed in the video itself.

[BPTV - Pilot]

lol

It came out early i guess... It was great! Made me lol when he tried to be a lawyer. Cant wait for the next episode! (BTW im ianross, this is my newgrounds account)

ThePivotsXXD responds:

Awesome!

[The Effects Of Radiation.]

Ok, Heres some CC

Honestely, it wasn't good. The concept has potential, but it doesnt seem like you put all the time and effort into this you could have. Most people spend months on there flash submissions, were you didn't even spend a day on it. If you can produce a good short gag with good art in lets say, a few hours? then great! But if itn not high quality you have to spend more time on it.

You lacked a lot of actual animation in this. It seemed to be just flashes of images. Newgrounds has a LOT of good animation and charachter design tutorials.

The Next thing would be your artwork. I felt that you just quickly scribbled these characters without putting much thought into lighting and shading, mood, posture, and so on. Spend at least an hour really thinking about your character and doing character maps. You need to know what you character looks like, what you charachetr smells like, tastes like, how he thinks, and what kind of mood he will be in by heart. Believe me, people LOVE a character with a lot of personality.

Since this is only your second flash, i will give you a 5/10 and a 2/5. Btw dont let your submissions being blammed get to you. It happens all the time here on newgrounds.

GeeBoi responds:

Thankyou! You're right, I should have put a lot more effect into it. Thanks. I've got a few good ideas running. Thankyou for spending your time to review this :D

[HappyHappyJoyJoy]

Not bad!

Your style reminds me of a guy named Acastro01... Anyway great for first... like REALLY GREAT for first. The artwork was OUTSTANDING! it could have been smoothed up a bit though. 5/5 9/10

whatthemeh responds:

Thank you very much- very chuffed indeed that you think that :D

[Reagan vs Stalin]

It was retarded

Thank you for wasting 10 seconds of my life! I wasn't entertained... AT ALL!!!!! There was no point to this what so ever! Next time you submit something to newgrounds make sure its longer and has a bit more of a story line.

Kflame responds:

Ya know I don't make fun of your movie... Oh... Thats right...

[A Flower Story]

What the heck?

Since when did arms come out of someone stomach? And the scenery was horrible. You should at least put SOME effort into your flash, how much time did you spend on this? 30 minutes? And the story... there was no point to it. A deformed woman thing walked out of a house, planted an oversized seed, then two talking flowers popped out, and one grew.... wth?.... and since its not meant to be a loop you should have put a preloader in it.

doppler73 responds:

Get out.