RoboJanitor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Class Projects 2008]

wow amazing!

All the projects where AMAZING, especially the last 1....

anyway, i have a noob question... how do you do it so you have a background that appears to not be moving and animation over that? it looks as if it was layered...

[Mice aren't for drawing]

I draw with a mouse

and it works just fine..... and i use a PC, so i dont see what you problem is.Ppractise (not excuses) make perfect. 2/10 1/5 you need to improve your art.

mickaleaf responds:

Thanks for your review. I'm not saying that drawing with a mouse is the reason for my lack of artistic talent. As an animator, I find it more efficient, especially for frame by frame, to use a tablet. If you've done animation before you would probably understand. Also, I never criticized PCs, it's just that I have a Mac displayed in the video itself.

[Go! Animate rocks!]

I completely agree with you

but this is a complete copy of harry partridges "GO ANIMATE, AN ANIMATION REVOLUTION!!!" and you gave him no credit what so ever 4/10 1/5 bad art as well.

[Wanna Read Manga]

Definetely worth a 10

Animation was so smooth! and it made me laugh... but it should be rated T

[BPTV - Pilot]

lol

It came out early i guess... It was great! Made me lol when he tried to be a lawyer. Cant wait for the next episode! (BTW im ianross, this is my newgrounds account)

ThePivotsXXD responds:

Awesome!

[LL - Fat Locks Ep1]

I AGREE

with the last guy who wrote a review. T_T this SUCKS! Let me guess how much though you put into this... uuuuuh... ZERO! Next time put some effort into your flash.

[Everydevil - Episode 1]

Well...

The only real issue with this is the animation. I liked the art style, but it could flow a bit better than it does. But when it comes to sound quality and story i though it was fantastic. And the art style fit VERY well with this kind of tune. And i agree, this isn't your typical web cartoon.

[Divided by Zero]

OMG

i was amazed. This would be amazing if you spent 2 MONTHS on it. You, may be the next zeurel. 10/10 5/5 great interpretation of the theme.

[Mischievious Monkey Magic]

Pretty good

Yeah i remember that comp... never got around to entering in it. Anyway it was great! made me lol. How the hell are u supposed to mop in the jungle? Anyway 5/5 10/10 great voice acting. I look forward to more!

[The Effects Of Radiation.]

Ok, Heres some CC

Honestely, it wasn't good. The concept has potential, but it doesnt seem like you put all the time and effort into this you could have. Most people spend months on there flash submissions, were you didn't even spend a day on it. If you can produce a good short gag with good art in lets say, a few hours? then great! But if itn not high quality you have to spend more time on it.

You lacked a lot of actual animation in this. It seemed to be just flashes of images. Newgrounds has a LOT of good animation and charachter design tutorials.

The Next thing would be your artwork. I felt that you just quickly scribbled these characters without putting much thought into lighting and shading, mood, posture, and so on. Spend at least an hour really thinking about your character and doing character maps. You need to know what you character looks like, what you charachetr smells like, tastes like, how he thinks, and what kind of mood he will be in by heart. Believe me, people LOVE a character with a lot of personality.

Since this is only your second flash, i will give you a 5/10 and a 2/5. Btw dont let your submissions being blammed get to you. It happens all the time here on newgrounds.

GeeBoi responds:

Thankyou! You're right, I should have put a lot more effect into it. Thanks. I've got a few good ideas running. Thankyou for spending your time to review this :D